editing on this video was pure genius!

Maybe the author doesn't work in an office to truly understand what it feels like but maybe one of his parents does? And he does have an insight to what people like this go through on a day to day basis and he's gone through the same situation but from a different point of view but tried to convey this through another character?

But animation wise, the sound was decent, I liked the silhouette style, it worked really well, and the deep red at the end really gave an impact when he slammed himself onto the computer.

Overall, although it wasn't very long, I still liked it :)

That was pretty damn poor, how its got a score of 3+ I have no idea.
Its not animated, and what is there isn't even drawn that well.

I should the drawing took you about 5-10 minutes probably not even that. Then it would just take the time recording your voice and importing it over the top.

There is nothing difficult about that.

Sorry but this is very bad, and needs alot of improvement.

I can see that your not bothered about making good flashes anymore, your more concerned on how popular you are, with your little fan group that vote high on all your submisions, good or bad!

You really need to start improving your work!

I know I have no flash's but I'm pretty sure I could easily make this, and if I did. I know for sure that it would get blammed. But like I said your not bothered about creating good work, you're more interesting in your popularity.

I can't believe some of the tracks I'm listening to on NG just lately, there's some out there now which are ridiculously professional sounding. Your pads are so 'airy' and remind me a lot of old chillout dance music I used to listen to when I was younger, it's a sound I've never been able to achieve. It's got a very similar feel to deadmau5's 'brazil' - which is one of my fav tracks by him, so that's a very big plus straight away!

It is a very relaxing melody, even though very similar all the way through, but hey, this is progressive house (to me) so that's the idea of it, it doesn't getting annoyingly repetitive though if that makes sense. And I can't talk much cause I struggle sometimes to change things up throughout my songs :P

I'm really intrigued by what you mean when you say 'high-pitched shake offset just before the kick'. It's not something I've done, so how would I go about doing it if you don't mind me asking?

If this had of been a track made by me, it's something I would be tremendously proud of! So please don't stop making music, and like Apeirophobiac said, keep putting detailed comments on your tracks, it really does help people who are truly interested in making music.

Thanks for the nice track :)

haha, quite amusing lyrics, if that's what it does really mean.

Now to the track... there's so many catchy points throughout it, it never gets boring, or repetitive, your effects on your lead/bass is just incredible, same with the drum samples, they are just crystal clear!

And the way you got them to just float around the vocals so perfectly, it's as if the vocals where written around your music when infact the music was written around the vocals!

Which is another thing, I'm pretty sure even without the vocals the track itself is that good, it would still be awesome on it's own. I'm still amazed at how well it's mixed too, like Gonif said.

I think I'm going to have to try separating each instrument into different groups, I take it when you said for example, hat's don't need low frequencies, you put a high pass filter on them, and then a low pass for the kick/bass? So it frees each instrument up so you only get the necessary frequencies for that track? Is that what you mean by it?

Either way this track is a definite 5, 10 and download, this is something that could come on in a club and no one would hesitate to get on the dance floor.

I'm having the same trouble as you, struggling to stick within the 10-12 second guidelines.

But yours is sounding very good indeed, oh and btw, you missed the 'm' from music in your myspace link :)

(You're getting a star for every 2 seconds ^_^)